Culprit
He thought he found the perfect hiding spot. Mornings were when he seemed to feel the most mischievous, waking the household at his whim, demanding food. What a con artist. I knew for a fact he snuck downstairs to nibble on his disgusting pellets, then slipped back onto the bed to begin his pitiful ‘feed me… I’m starving’ mews.
Normally, I ignored his antics. I finished my toiletries and after breakfast retired to the den, when yelling from the kitchen disturbed my peace. Rushing in, I discovered the trash can toppled over, contents spilled onto the floor. My companion scolded me for committing the crime. Resisting the urge to grab the wrapper from last night’s steak, I backed out of the kitchen.
Time for punishment, I found the culprit hiding behind the sheer drapes stupidly thinking I couldn’t see him. His ears flickered and nervously he meowed, “Hello, dog.”
Word Count: 149
Written for the wonderful writing challenge, Mondays Finish the Story. Each Monday, Barbara Beacham posts a picture prompt, along with the first line of the story. The stories must be between 100-150 words and must include the given first line, shown in italics in the story.
Special thanks to Barbara Beacham for sharing her excellent photography skills to provide such challenging prompts. Check out the MFTS blog… some great short stories posted. https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/
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Like the twist – nicely done!
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Thanks! Poor kitty, the dog is on to him.
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I love this story! What a great POV from the dog, which we don’t find out until the end! Thanks for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and be well… ^..^
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Thanks, poor dog, always getting the blame. Glad you enjoyed! See you next week!!!
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See you then!
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Ha! It’s written from the POV of the dog! Clever! I imagine their relationship is like Tom & whatever the dog’s name is from Tom and Jerry! 😀
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I don’t think they get along too well, especially, if he keeps framing the dog! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!!!
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I didn’t realize what this sentence meant until the very last:” Resisting the urge to grab the wrapper from last night’s steak”. LOL…. was wondering why a human was resisting the “urge”. Nice buildup of suspense.
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I wondered how people would react to that line! Sorry to be so sneaky!! Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading!
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There’s no need to be sorry – it’s part of the suspense game 🙂
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Loved this! What a great story from the dog’s POV!
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The poor dog always takes the brunt for the kitty’s shenanigans. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!
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Nicely done! I love a good twist.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!!
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very cute story 🙂
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Thank you!!! Glad you enjoyed!!!
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Love the humour in this.
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Thank you!!!!
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A great twist! The poor dog always gets the blame for the tricksy cat’s antics. 🙂
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My dogs were always getting in trouble and usually it was the cat’s fault. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks!
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Loved your story from the dog’s perspective. Liked the twist at the end. 🙂
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Thanks… my kitties were always getting the dogs in trouble.
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Lovely spin CQ ~ Disgusting pellets are no substitute for a doggy licking the best steak dribbles ~ 🙂
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Doggies have wonderful palates!! Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed.
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Cats are cunning like that. Got to admire them.
Very good story!
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Those kitties are definitely cunning!!! Thanks!!!
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It’s always the doggie that gets the blame. It looks like the cat’s going to get his come-uppance this time though! Fun story!
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It’s a cat’s world… but maybe not this time!!! Thanks… glad you enjoyed!!
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Sorry dog! Haha. This is a very clever story. Great job! 🙂
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!!!!
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Hahaha – I love it! Great story 🙂
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!!
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Great twist at the end, CQ. I love this dogs eye view of a cat. Well written. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks! I think the dog had this cat’s number! Glad you enjoyed!
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