Traitor
“The family had no idea that little Luigi would grow up to be a traitor. Patriarch Dominic beamed with pride when presented his newborn grandson, the Conti name endured with another fine male to embrace the family business.
Dominic forbade anyone to tell Luigi the true nature of the Conti enterprise. Loyalty to the family must be foremost in his grandson’s psyche. Knowledge of what his family was involved in could come after Luigi’s devotion to his family was sealed.
From the sidelines, Luigi’s Uncle Nico watched; certain Dominic misjudged his grandson. He suspected the deception designed to keep him from the truth, in fact, prompted Lou to question his family.
Lou’s decision to attend law school had Dominic preening about a new consigliere in the family. Upon graduation, Lou joined the FBI and Nico knew the charade was over. When vehicles screeched to a halt outside the Conti compound, Nico knew ‘agent’ Luigi had arrived to learn about the family business.
Word count: 149
(Forgive me for the stereotypical depiction of an Italian family. My father worked for an Italian company for years, and I know Italians to be anything but stereotypical. Well… except for Guido… we were never sure about Guido…)
Written for the wonderful writing challenge, Mondays Finish the Story. Each Monday, Barbara Beacham posts a picture prompt, along with the first line of the story. The stories must be between 100-150 words and must include the given first line, shown in italics in the story.
Special thanks to Barbara Beacham for sharing her excellent photography skills to provide such challenging prompts. Check out the MFTS blog… some great short stories posted. https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/
Direct link to this week’s stories… http://new.inlinkz.com/view.php?id=556654
Well… except for Guido… we were never sure about Guido… Ha!
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He was mystery!! Thanks for reading!!
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A great story
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Thanks, Donna!!!
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I agree with Donna, this is a great story! And I loved the footnote about Guido.
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Thanks PJ!!! So glad you enjoyed!!!
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I thought this was a well written story! Joy to read!
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Thnks!! So glad you enjoyed… appreciate your comment!!
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Well, clichés become clichés for a reason… This is what the Godfather might have been if Michael had stuck to his principles. Good stuff!
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Thank you!! Would have been nice if Michael had stuck to his principles!!
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Is anyone ever sure of a fellow named Guido? 🙂 Loved the story CQ and thank you for the lovely words at the end. I appreciate it! Be well and stay tuned for the next upcoming challenge. ^..^
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There really is a Guido and he’s a nice man… but with that name, we teased him terribly! So glad you enjoyed the story. See you next week!!
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I look forward to it!
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great story, really well written 🙂
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Thank you… so glad you enjoyed!!!
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Very well written I did enjoy your take on this image…
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Thank you!!!
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That’s one way to get to the truth! A strong man, joining law enforcement and going up against his family. I hope he doesn’t end up sleeping with the fishes 😦
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Let’s hope not!!! So glad you enjoyed… thanks!!!
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Excellent…especially the comment about Guido!
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Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed!
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The family’s choices came back to get them!
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They should he been truthful with him from the beginning!! Thanks for stopping by!!
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A very nicely written story. I wonder what the fallout from Luigi’s treachery will be…? I like the note about Guido at the end. 🙂
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Thank you! I’d say the family is in for a rough time!!
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The theme may be a bit cliche but the writing was great. A joy to read.
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Thank you… I suppose a few cliches once in a while are okay! Glad you enjoyed!!!
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Great take on the prompt – one is never quite sure!
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Thank you!!
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Good story CQ. I’m sure after the success of “The Godfather,” no one will mind stories about the Mafia. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I hope not!! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
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