Omnipotent
“I see absolutely everything.”
I, and the others like me, are the guardians of this planet, assigned by the Dominion to observe the evolution of humans. My masters deposited the primordial soup of life on worlds across the void to create a universe of sentient peaceful beings. We nurture and watch these creatures, less they stray from the prime directive.
These humans are oblivious to our presence. They go about their lives, walking past us… without concern. The concern is ours.
Turmoil while learning to live as a cohesive population is a normal occurrence as humans mature. Conflict is a natural tendency, one the Dominions struggled to overcome in their infancy. However, these humans on this world committed a more heinous sign of immaturity. They abused the planet’s natural resources without remorse, and their world is dying.
Soon the Dominion will arrive to discipline their wayward children.
Word Count: 147
Written for the wonderful writing challenge, Mondays Finish the Story. Each Monday, Barbara Beacham posts a picture prompt, along with the first line of the story. The stories must be between 100-150 words and must include the given first line, shown in italics in the story.
Special thanks to Barbara Beacham for sharing her excellent photography skills to provide such challenging prompts. Check out the MFTS blog… some great short stories posted. https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/
Direct link to this week’s stories… http://new.inlinkz.com/view.php?id=555031
Someone’s going to get a spanking. 🙂 Love the way this unfolded, reminded me of the Star Trek stories.
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Thank you! I believe a spanking is in order!
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Serious note tied in here. Enjoyed the way it evolved to the time of reckoning.
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Thank you…. someone should be holding us accountable.
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Well done! I want to read more, which is a sign of a story well written. Thank you for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed! See you next Monday!!
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See you then!
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Definitely my kind of story!
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Thanks! So glad you enjoyed!
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Excellent piece of writing. Very foreboding at the end.
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed. Let’s hope our end will be better.
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Yes! 🙂
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Lovely authoritative and convincing story!
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed!!!
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I loved your take on the prompt. Well said about the planet. Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Susan. Glad you enjoyed.
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Sci-fi isn’t one of my favorite genres, but I think this is well done and focuses on our real-life problems as humans and our planet.
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Tessa, thank you. I appreciate your comment, especially since you aren’t a fan of sci-fi. There are times when the message, regardless of how it’s presented, is the important thing.
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I agree.
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Poor world… a reminder to love the world! Like this story.
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Wish everyone loved the world before it’s destroyed. Thanks for your comment.
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This is an excellent response to the prompt and so true of out world. Well done.
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Thank you very much!!!
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Nice message. Hopefully the Dominion can beat us into shape. Somebody needs to.
Great story!
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Thanks! I agree someone needs to beat us into shape before it’s too late.
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An intelligent response to the prompt, wrapped up in a very good story ~ Well written 🙂
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Thank you, John. I appreciate your comment!!
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We can’t claim we don’t deserve it… Excellent use of the prompt 🙂
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No… we certainly can’t say we don’t deserve it… Thanks for you kind comment!
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I think it’s a disciplining that’s long overdue. An intelligent and well written response to the prompt. 🙂
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Thank you. It’s a shame we have to consider the fact we need to be disciplined. So gld you enjoyed the story.
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Lovely story! The question is however: How will Dominions discipline Humans, if they have already left the infantile behaviour of conflicts behind? Or does that only apply to conflicts among themselves? In that case, the Dominions are possibly even less evolved than Humans, as we have (although only quite recently) learned to treat animals with a bit more respect. Unless we’re kept like cattle for slaughter… Thinking about it, I’m not too sure about these Dominions and their greater good. Sounds a bit fishy to me. 🙂
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Ummm… very interesting observation… I do believe you may have the beginnings of a rebel group that does not trust the Dominion. While the Dominion may have put their own internal conflicts aside, we do not know if they are benevolent or if they will control through force. My hope is they are benevolent and guide us to protect and respect our planet.
Well… idealistic, aren’t I??
Love, love, love your comment!! Thanks so much!!!!!
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I really enjoyed this- it has a lot of potential for a bigger story.. 🙂
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Thanks so much. I’ve thought about writing this story for a while but too many projects already on my plate. I think it would be interesting to explore. Glad you enjoyed!!!
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I know the feeling 🙂 maybe you could integrate it into an existing project – good luck!
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